It is sometimes said that ‘travel broadens the mind’. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this?
It has been observed over the period of time that there are lots of opportunities to enhance our mental thoughts and general knowledge whenever we travel to any place. In my opinion, travelling to outstations help many of us to expand our mindset and patience level in many ways. In this essay, I will discuss how travel helps us to improve our brain functioning by knowing different people from different backgrounds and exploring new places.
To begin with, travelling gives an opportunity to meet new people from numerous countries and different cultures. We learn increasingly lots of things about their daily routine and cultures which helps us to enlarge our mindset in many ways. Nevertheless, our mind starts working widely while spending time with open mind people from other countries. Last summers, for instance, when I went to Kasol on my holidays, I met with a group of people from Russia, who helped me to learn new ways to enjoy life.
Exploring new places while travelling to new places, helps us to enhance our mindset and thought process. Because we travel outstations to spend our free time, we feel fresh and peaceful and it widely help us in increasing our memory and other brain functioning. Furthermore, it deepens our general knowledge about new cultures and expands our memory. Many people, for example, travel to hill stations to spend some quality time with their family that helps them in enhancing their thoughts.
To sum up, travel is a great way to learn about different people and about their culture. Moreover, it helps us to feel refreshed, and make our intelligence wider by exploring new places.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: period
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Message: Did you mean 'helps'?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, while, for example, for instance, in my opinion, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1367.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98905109489 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6458746516 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536496350365 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.2096832746 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 105.153846154 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0769230769 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07692307692 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0764278050146 0.244688304435 31% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0350266276987 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0273373750552 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0536492140969 0.151304729494 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0202545702126 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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