Traditions are about the past and innovation is about the future, and it has been argued that we need to let go of traditions for the sake of progress. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this? What role should traditions have in our lives?
In this rapid growing environment, it is a common belief that the past and upcoming time are associated with cultural traditions and an evolution science. Although there are certainly valid arguments to the contrary, I firmly agree that there is necessity to exempt the culture and traditions from our lives to accelerate the progress in science.
The main point which I believe to be indeed pivotal is the fact that various cultural traditions have a detrimental effect on new changes that constantly required in technological era. The majority of people get a conservative mindset, and trust in superstitious actions, even though, this type of attitude hinders the scientific improvement. One of the salient examples to illustrate this is in some parts of the world, organ donation is prohibited due to the old age customs. As an outcome, many patients to suffer from particular ailments as it is not feasible to find an organ donor. Thus, this circumstance explains the reason that we should not put aside modern advancement rather than gaining the benefits from it.
In contrast, cultures and traditions help to create the identity of people. The means that the ancestors practice the traditional values while raising their offspring. As a result, human characteristics are shaped by the customs that are passed down to the next generations. For instance, in traditional norms, elderly people are highly respected by youths, and the children become an excellent community member who is aware of the customs to honor the previous generation. Hence, human personalities are impacted by the traditional customs.
In conclusion, I strongly contend that humankind is in place to develop rapidly instead of sticking to conventional traditions. Therefore, the traditions could be neglected owing to the crucial needs in science fields in the foreseeable future.
- It is often argued that it is difficult to get children to read. Why do you think this is? What measures could be taken to encourage children to read more?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience 78
- Traditions are about the past and innovation is about the future, and it has been argued that we need to let go of traditions for the sake of progress. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this? What role should traditions have in our lives? 89
- Traditions are about the past and innovation is about the future, and it has been argued that we need to let go of traditions for the sake of progress. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this? What role should traditions have in our lives?Give r 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, so, therefore, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1579.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35254237288 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01686154891 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620338983051 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9047334924 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.785714286 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0714285714 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229834813241 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0694762860603 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521913815979 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128535541362 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0456847281011 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.87 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.