Traditions are about the past and innovation is about the future, and it has been argued that we need to let go of traditions for the sake of progress. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this? What role should traditions have in our lives?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
it is a common belief that the history and upcoming time are associated with cultural traditions and an advancement in science respectively. while there are certainly valid arguments to the contrary, I firmly agree that we ought to exempt the culture and traditions from our lives in order to accelerate the progress in science.
it is an indisputable fact that some cultural traditions have a detrimental effect on changes that constantly required in modern era. this is because, may people develop a conservative mindset, and trust in a superstitious action. Unfortunately, this type of mindset hinders the scientific development. One of the salient examples to illustrate this is in some parts of the world, organ donation is prohibited due to the old age customs. this results in the patients to suffer from particular ailments as it is not feasible to have organ donor. Thus, this circumstance explains the reason that people should not put aside modern achievement rather than gaining the benefits from it.
In contrast, cultures and traditions build the identity of individuals. The reason is that the ancestors have been practicing and following the traditional values while raising their offsprings. As a result, human characteristics are shaped by the customs that are passed down to the next generations. For instance, in tradition, elderly people are highly respected by young generation. Consequently, the children become the person who is aware of the customs to honor the old generation. Hence, it assists to build our personalities.
In conclusion, I strongly contend that humankind is in position to develop rapidly rather than to stick to conservative traditions. Therefore, the traditions could be neglected due to crucial science field in the foreseeable future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, hence, if, may, so, therefore, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1526.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43060498221 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14679702726 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583629893238 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.216559782 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.375 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5625 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.9375 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207741038659 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0580659551953 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0499704967816 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11672548075 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0425101478382 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.