It is thought by some that it is better to live in a city while others believe that life is better in the countryside.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion
Living in the city versus living in the countryside both have their own pros and cons. It would highly depend on what a person wants or needs, as well as his or her priorities.
Majority of the population choose to live in the city because of the wide range of job opportunities and the higher wages. Compared to the countryside, the city also has more entertainment choices like bigger shopping malls, established restaurants, huge cinemas, and a wilder nightlife; which has its certain allure, especially for the youth. On the other hand, higher wages almost certainly equates to higher costs of living. A large number of entertainment options also mean that you have a lot more things you can spend your money on. And to add to that, denser populations also mean greater pollution.
I most often hear people in their twenties say that they have moved to the city, but rarely hear them say they have moved to the countryside.
However rare, I have heard of stories where people who are ready to settle down and those who want to retire move to the countryside. As well as those who have initially moved to the city for work, moving back to their hometowns. Their reasons mostly consist of wanting to live a quiet and simple life, since they have grown tired of the expensive and fast-paced way of living in the city.
All in all, I do not have any strong feelings for either option. Whether people are currently driven by their passion for their career and social life or whether they are already prepared to settle down and live a more peaceful life highly influences their preference to either live in the city or the countryside.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: Many; Numerous
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, well, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1361.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72569444444 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50993156524 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5625 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.5423129811 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.692307692 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1538461538 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.84615384615 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114495271844 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0437443220915 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0553178045116 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0677607882663 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0436981857203 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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