Life was better when technology was simpler.
To what extent do you agree and disagree?
It is argued that when technology was simpler, life was better. I disagree with this statement; technology makes our life easier and simpler than before. This essay shows how life becomes better by using technology.
Firstly, technology is playing an essential role in our life. Not only does technology make communication between family members easier but also it helps them to feel safe, even if they are far away from each other. Mobile applications and social media are assisting people to contact anyone, even though they are not in the same country. For instance, in 1998, when I was working at Gulf countries, it was hard to contact my family; however, now it is really easy to call my family anytime or to see them by using mobile applications, such as Facebook messenger.
Secondly, getting information for any life's aspects is faster than the old days. It is the fact that World Wide Web improves our lives by providing us with the required answers by a simple click on the keyboard. For instance, if I want to get information about something, I will go to the internet and google it, but in the past, I had to visit a library to search in books to get the needed information. Moreover, the invention of the Internet helps us in education. To illustrate, I live in Saudi Arabia; I took an online IELTS course with a teacher who lives in Egypt without the need of travelling there.
In conclusion, in the modern era, the power of technology has shifted the balance from the hands of a few to the masses. Which helps people on communication, education, and gaining information in the easiest ways. There is no doubt that technology makes our lives better.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1391.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78006872852 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70558276164 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601374570447 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5990143271 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.7333333333 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.4 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240093951515 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0879226379866 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.146412801327 0.0667982634062 219% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16176775149 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.157618756789 0.056905535591 277% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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