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Life was better when technology was simpler.

To what extent do you agree and disagree?

It is argued that technology has made life more difficult than before. I disagree with this statement; technology makes life easier and simpler than before. This essay shows how life becomes better by using technology. Firstly, technology is playing an essential role in our life. Not only does it make our communication between family members easier but also it helps them to feel safe, even though they are far away from each other. Mobile applications and social media assist people to contact anyone, even though they are not in the same place, or they are not in the same country. For instance, in 1998 when I was working at Gulf countries, it was hard to contact my family; however, now it is really easy to call my family anytime or see them by using mobile applications. Secondly, getting information for any life aspects is faster than the old days. It is the fact that World Wide Web improves our lives by providing us with the required answers by a simple click on the keyboard. For instance, if I want to get information about something, I will go to the internet and google it, but in the past, I had to visit a library and search in books to get the required information. Moreover, the invention of the Internet helps us in education. To illustrate, I live in Saudi Arabia; I took an online IELTS course from my home with a teacher who lives in Egypt without the need of travelling there. In conclusion, in the modern era, the power of technology has been shifted the balance from the hands of a few to the masses, which helps the people on communication, education, and gaining information by easiest ways. It no doubts that technology makes our lives better.

Secondly, getting information for any life aspects is faster than old days. It is the fact that, World Wide Web improves our lives by providing us with the required answers by a simple click on the keyboard. For instance, if I want to get information about something, I will go to internet and google it, but in the past I had to visit a library and search in books to get the required information. Moreover, the invention of Internet helps us on education. To illustrate, I live in Saudi Arabia; I took online IELTS course from my home with a teacher who lives in Egypt without the need of travelling there.

In conclusion, in the modern era, the power of technology has been shifted the balance from the hands of a few to the masses, which helps the people on communication, education, and gaining information by easiest ways. It no doubt that technology makes our lives better.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 272, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...that technology makes our lives better.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 24.0651302605 204% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 74.0 41.998997996 176% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 4262.0 1615.20841683 264% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 655.0 315.596192385 208% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.50687022901 5.12529762239 127% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.05894927669 4.20363070211 120% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.31181258345 2.80592935109 154% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.311450381679 0.561755894193 55% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1175.4 506.74238477 232% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 5.43587174349 258% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 278.677820251 49.4020404114 564% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 213.1 106.682146367 200% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.75 20.7667163134 158% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0420075949477 0.244688304435 17% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0326501853654 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.050848780606 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0422088856627 0.151304729494 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0264576194237 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.6 13.0946893788 195% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 22.08 50.2224549098 44% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 11.3001002004 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 21.07 12.4159519038 170% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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