living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems.to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Nowadays, living in other countries may cause people quite difficult challenges. One of the obstacles they would face is having to speak a foreign language. Which can sometimes cause severe social and practical problems. I consider such issues not to be unsolvable with the advancement of technology.
Speaking a foreign language is one of the essential functions for socializing while living abroad. Socializing and living in groups is in our nature and if one fails to make contact with others or not succeed in making friends, he or she could suffer from various social problems. Depression and isolation are some of the issues that people would face in the absence of friends.
In addition, one of the major issues in practical aspects where people feel the most pressure is in work-related areas. Those who are not able to fully understand and comprehend the employer’s need might lose their job or not even have the opportunity to find a job. For example, a person who wants to live in China should learn Mandarin; otherwise, working and living there would become near to impossible because most of its population do not speak other languages.
It is true that not being able to speak foreign languages while living abroad can cause problems. However, I believe that advances in technology have made a living in another country whose languages you do not know much easier. There are numerous applications in smartphones which help people do their daily task easier and faster regardless of the country they live in. Google translate is an example of the application which has made communication easier between users from different countries by allowing them to translate their native language into other languages.
In conclusion, although living in a country where one has to speak its language would not be without its hassles, but technology has aided people to tackle such problems to some extent. I believe people can easily take advantage of the new progress in technology.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, while, as to, for example, in addition, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1674.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10365853659 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72142555463 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539634146341 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8134805489 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.625 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299466351794 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0952383534296 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0642798607117 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159748084878 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0455758490899 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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