Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
In today's world, when going to another country to work or study is becoming well-liked, another problem come into sight, many people argued that living in a different country with a language that different from our mother tongue, is the result of many serious social and practical problem. Although It can't deny that much hardness can happen when you live in another nation, somehow I partly disagree with this statement
The fact that many problem can be caused when coming to another country at first can be hard for someone is true. When you first came to any different country regardless of purpose, getting used to the weather, people or environmental factors immediately is impossible. There would be many obstacles in the way, for example, a number of Vietnamese student who study abroad said that they had trouble most in financial problem, things in foreign countries are mostly more expensive than their home country. However, others who work in another nation agree that It's just a phase, If you lived there long enough, you would probably have your own way to avoid all the problems.
In addition, people must have done some serious research before choosing to live or work there. Sure that social or practical obstacle would happen at first, but long after when you get used to the element, the context, It will not happen. For example, In Vietnam, there are many foreigner teacher who come to Vietnam to teach foreign language, they have adversity when they first moved here due to their nationality, many people tried to scam their money, or they can't go through the road because of the vast amount of vehicle, but after three or four months, they were all get used to it and know how to dodge all the problems.
In conclusion, living in a distinctive nation is not always the easiest way, but negativity like social and practical problem is not It is all about, they will not come in the way for so long when we live there long enough to handle them
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 260, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...er tongue, is the result of many serious social and practical problem. Although I...
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Line 1, column 304, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...cial and practical problem. Although It cant denied that many hardness can happen wh...
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Line 1, column 304, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'cants'?
Suggestion: cants
...cial and practical problem. Although It cant denied that many hardness can happen wh...
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Line 1, column 321, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun hardness seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much hardness', 'a good deal of hardness'.
Suggestion: much hardness; a good deal of hardness
...l problem. Although It cant denied that many hardness can happen when you live in another nat...
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Line 2, column 15, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun problem seems to be countable; consider using: 'many problems'.
Suggestion: many problems
...gree with this statement The fact that many problem can be caused when coming to another co...
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Line 2, column 72, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...be caused when coming to another country at first can be hard for someone is true...
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Line 2, column 290, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun obstacle seems to be countable; consider using: 'many obstacles'.
Suggestion: many obstacles
...mediately is impossible. There would be many obstacle in the way, for example, many Vietnames...
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Line 2, column 477, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eign countries are mostly more expensive than their home country. However, others...
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Line 2, column 547, Rule ID: AGREE_WITH_THE_FACT[1]
Message: Use simply 'agree that'.
Suggestion: agree that
...ever, others who work in another nation agree with the fact that Its just a phase, If you lived there lo...
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Line 3, column 465, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...eople tried to scam their money or they cant go through the road because of the vast...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1633.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74709302326 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32395110007 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520348837209 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 98.6440570942 49.4020404114 200% => OK
Chars per sentence: 163.3 106.682146367 153% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.4 20.7667163134 166% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284267949507 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109198992466 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0727559947341 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179717680191 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0840037019602 0.056905535591 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 13.0946893788 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.43 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 9.78957915832 174% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.