Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Nowdays a common problem among people how lives in overseas country is they force to speak foreign language that sometimes they are face with social problems , additionally practical problems . I am agree to some extent with this statement while technology could be useful .
With regard to social problems , one of the main reasons that having to speak foreign language is isolationism since they are unable to make a relationship with other people as a result of this issue they would not have a friend so they may get isolationism . Furthermore sometimes it could have a negative impact on their job opportunities and cause practical problems . In the other word some jobs are required to communication with other people for instance working in a restaurant .
At the same time , the advances in technology have influenced positively on communication in foreign countries . For example , several application have made to translate wide variety of language such as google translate , one of the most popular software that is extremely helpful to translate languages , so eventually they would learn another language gradually .
In conclusion , living in foreign country would be difficult because they pass the probably pass the hard day with forcing speak another language however in my vantage point due to these softwares and individual attempt it would be a positive improvement on their skills for their future because they can speak 2 languages .
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...ve a friend so they may get isolationism . Furthermore sometimes it could have a n...
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...y would learn another language gradually . In conclusion , living in foreign c...
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...uture because they can speak 2 languages .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, may, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1220.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 230.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30434782609 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90799068589 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573913043478 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 388.8 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 83.7166911374 49.4020404114 169% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.5 106.682146367 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.75 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.0 7.06120827912 212% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312923111726 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140498398891 0.084324248473 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0817400469693 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199661660094 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103029264975 0.056905535591 181% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.