A lot of social problems can be related to teenagers these days. Some feel that this is because parents are not able to spend enough time to take care of their teenage children. Do you agree or disagree?
Whether the most social problems pertaining to teenagers are caused by a shortage of parents' attention to their offsprings has always been a matter of vigorous debates. Some people are in favour, whereas others tend to contradict them. I am inclined to concur with the latter, which will be elaborated in this essay.
To begin with, high competitiveness and widespread rivalry of the contemporary world seem to be one of the major aspects accountable for the issue. Conditioned to grapple with constant hardships, for example, in developing countries influence dominant traits of the young. Moreover, hereditarian aspects also appear to be possible factors contributing to the outraging behaviour of the younger generation. Furthermore, the allure of luxurious life, which is widely advocated via media nowadays, might be a tremendous incentive for those incapable of earning this honestly to commit crimes, thereby contributing to the problem. For instance, constantly beholding pricey cars and not being able to afford them, young perpetrators resort to stealing or even hijacking cars.
On the contrary, some people tend to claim that improper upbringing is to blame, add that the root cause might be parents' lack of leisure time. The rapid pace of the contemporary world and, at times, excessive greed appear to be villains of the situation. Another fact might be the contemporary shift in the set of values of today's world. Although it used to be family and children, more and more parents care for the most part about there own welfare, which results in selfish next generation and bleak perspectives for the future.
All in all, although issues with upbringing and general attitude of parents on children seem to be rather apparent, insidious effect of changes in the way of life of contemporary society might have far more profound effect.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Message: Did you mean 'their own'?
Suggestion: their own
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, honestly, if, moreover, so, whereas, for example, for instance, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1566.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27272727273 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8777776005 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632996632997 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.5940800446 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.461538462 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8461538462 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07692307692 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164498890623 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0538741104898 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0392705678357 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0995400404058 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0444181142653 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.88 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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