love and affection towards the god.
In Hinduism , in contrast to karma, which is selfish, or pleasurable love, devotion refers to elevated love, and Karuna is compassion and mercy, which impels one to help reduce the suffering of others. As a human being we are lucky enough to have a strong base of spirituality, which always protect is, bless us, support us and stand always besides us ,throughout the journey of life. God have a power to light in the dark nights. The Reason for our joyful being is a source of bhakti. In this essay I tries my best to elaborate the love and affection towards the god and the characteristics of lord towards their devotes.
God loves us with no aim. We love him with a plethora of aim. There are many belief and mysteries for the love with god. In this sense, the Love of God is a whole-life process, not a study, and not a thing. All our emotions, all the events in our lives, all our thoughts, becomes the warp and woof of a moving symphony LIVING the Love of God. This is the point where words fall away, and only the Reflection of the Beloved remains, in continual motion, finally seen clearly moving in each moment of our life. We thought it meant we love Him, and suddenly realize it meant He loves us in unspeakable astonishment.
Lord never breaks the promises given by them. on the top of that , they think about the good and bad for the community as well as the natural being whom they give birth for the sake of soul on their karma of past births. In the event of any major problems sometimes lord can change their view also to save the life of pure souls. For example, The Lord is keen to ensure that the words of His devotees are never falsified. During the Kurukshetra war, He had vowed never to take up weapons Himself. But Bhishma vowed that he would make the Lord take up weapons.
In today’s busy life ,masses have no enough time for devotion and went to different places to find calm and lord , but in actual they won’t able to find the god , who lives inside their heart. Our lord gives us many ways to identify them , but a few of devotes can identify them adequetly. However, there are some people who have a true faith in god and they spent their whole life with them as a happy soul.
To conclude, the time is the most precious thing , which never stops, as a human we made many mistakes ,only devotion ( bhakti ) with pure heart , without any expectation, can save us and gives us an entry permission to heaven.
“My birth is a lucky one that we have our lord shree guru someshwar dev with us, who always saves me , support me and motivates me for having a good future life.”
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, however, if, so, well, for example, in contrast, as well as, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 24.0651302605 237% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 41.998997996 152% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2125.0 1615.20841683 132% => OK
No of words: 483.0 315.596192385 153% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.39958592133 5.12529762239 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68799114503 4.20363070211 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.300349405 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 246.0 176.041082164 140% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509316770186 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 666.0 506.74238477 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 0.809619238477 988% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 12.0 4.76152304609 252% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.3496727499 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.3913043478 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.52173913043 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 27.0 5.01903807615 538% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 8.67935871743 230% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241553984245 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0819061128744 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11803918702 0.0667982634062 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103642813188 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.127540894719 0.056905535591 224% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.24 12.4159519038 66% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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