Majority of children are raised by their grandparents. To what extent do you think it affects the whole family?
There is a controversial issue about the impact that grandparents cause by nurturing children on the household. Some social workers state that it causes negative for the household, while some politicians claim that it will be beneficial. In this essay, I will consider both points of view and agree with the idea of positive effects.
Let us start with reasons why some social workers advocate that it is negative for children to be raised by grandparents. The first reason is that it usually allows couples to build career. Many young parents cannot build a career, since they are engaged in parenting, but retired family members can take a responsibility for it, which enables them to succeed at work. Another reason is that grandparents frequently teach youngsters better than young parents. The elderly have more experience than the rest members, so they can share both invaluable wisdom and advice to growing generations. Therefore, it is reasonable to say that child caring by grandparents is a positive trend.
However, some politicians propagate that it is negative for children to be nurtured by grandparents. They justify their opinion with the following reasons. Firstly, they cannot teach children modern lifestyle. Many older people are unaware of contemporary trends, which are important to learn for youngsters to master, so they cannot fully replace parents in development. Secondly, they are not able to care for children. Many grandparents are unable to nurture children, since they are both too old and physically incapable, so they cannot entirely substitute parents, no matter how hard they want. As a result, it is rational to say that upbringing by the elderly is a negative tendency.
In conclusion, even though some social workers believe that it causes a negative impacts on the family, if grandparents care for young members, I think that it is advantageous for all members of family for the above mentioned reasons.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, i think, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1639.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21974522293 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88343217411 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544585987261 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.2702455182 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.4117647059 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4705882353 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41176470588 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0870991505616 0.244688304435 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0320833212409 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0363887170238 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0517829639488 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0191020558437 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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