Many animals are facing extinction in the wild. Why is this happening? What can be done to protect them?
From the dawn of the twenty-first century, the topic of endangered species has remained in the limelight. Nowadays, numerous animals are at the brink of disappearance because of being hunted at an unprecedented rate. This essay suggests strict policies and conducive breeding programs as viable options in order to protect them.
Man has been hunting animals for ages; however, the motives behind it have changed radically. Whereas in the past, men used to kill an animal for food, now, they hunt animals for money-making and prestige. To be more precise, elephants are killed by poachers to obtain their tusks that are highly sought after in the black market whereas tigers and lions were hunted by kings of the previous century to show their bravery and fearlessness. Owing to this, many such animals are now limited to a population of few hundreds. Certainly, hunting of animals is the plausible reason for their extinction in the wild.
Even though this issue may seem intractable, solutions are available. Firstly, governments should establish special breeding programs to elevate the population of endangered species. For instance, the “Save The Lions” initiative by the Indian government proved to be instrumental in curbing the declining numbers of lions in India. Also, poachers and hunters should be given strict punishments to deter their activities. If these solutions are implemented, then numerous near extinction animals can be saved in the long run.
To conclude, many animals have disappeared, and some are about to disappear since they are preyed upon. It is time to take war-footing against culprits who are responsible for this, or otherwise, future generations might only be able to see these magnificent creatures in documentaries.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 288, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...magnificent creatures in documentaries.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, so, then, whereas, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1491.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36330935252 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90111203021 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629496402878 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2229709426 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.4 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5333333333 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.73333333333 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227657136871 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0720275079459 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537150544518 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124058076281 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0137974134947 0.056905535591 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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