Many childhood diseases can now be prevented through the use of vaccines.
Should parents be made by law to immunise their children against common diseases or should individuals have the right to choose not to immunise their children?
Children do not grow up physically perfect yet. They are physically weak to diseases. Some parents do not know what is suitable vaccinations for their children of age. Government should help vaccination and medical knowledge to children and parents.
Many kinds of diseases are exposing more easier for children. The reason why, children hurt too easily. Children love to run around near school, home and so on. Also, they wonder about all around things. So they have to as soon as possible do vaccinate to disease. Such as, tetanus and chicken pox. But not all parents do vaccination to their children. Because they want to left their children for saving money or nature cure from disease. Therefore, children can die to easy. Most of reason is they came too late to hospital.
The government to prevent this, must oblige vaccinations until elementary school students. The government should help children have an awareness about vaccination. After children grow up, parents help vaccinate to their children that they can choose what need them.
Furthermore, the government should educate about vaccination for children. They have to what is suitable vaccination of age to children. For example, women have to vaccinate cervical cancer. Due to some adults do not know about what vaccination needs for them.
In conclusion, government must oblige about vaccination to disease until elementary school students. Also, teaching children about important to vaccination is when children grow up adults, they can go their self to hospital to vaccination. And parents can help to keep a healthy body with their children.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 37, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
... Many kinds of diseases are exposing more easier for children. The reason why, children ...
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Line 3, column 495, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ldren can die to easy. Most of reason is they came too late to hospital. The g...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1366.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27413127413 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72505921676 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498069498069 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 20.2975951904 49% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.3890628948 49.4020404114 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 56.9166666667 106.682146367 53% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 10.7916666667 20.7667163134 52% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.08333333333 7.06120827912 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241843618156 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0869568559148 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0676252026262 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168901835203 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0435620394635 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.0946893788 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.33 50.2224549098 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.1 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.88 8.58950901804 80% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 9.78957915832 41% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 10.1190380762 59% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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