Each year, the crime rate increases.
What are the causes of crime and what could be done to prevent this rise in criminal activity?
These days, crime is an issue of increasing concern in the world. Especially, sexual and robbery rate are very high. It cause anxity from citizen to walk around late night and daytime. To solve this problems, the government should makes strong punishments to reduce crime rate. I want to disscuss how to slove this problem.
One of the main reasons of criminality is thief that they want to stolen car, restaurants money and tourists wallet so on. people usually can see broken windows, stolen money and their stuffs, when they arrived to near their car. However, police officer does not care citizen of fear. thiefs are already know of no catch them.
The government should make strong punishments to reduce crime. They catched high speed car in road of city. Over speed car cause accident and people die. For example, in Korea, over speed fine is 30 dollar, but if they paid 3000 dollar to pay fine, people keep law.
In conculsion, the government should make high punishment to keep social order. It will be good way to reduce crime rate.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 121, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'causes'?
Suggestion: causes
...xual and robbery rate are very high. It cause anxity from citizen to walk around late...
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Line 1, column 195, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...around late night and daytime. To solve this problems, the government should makes s...
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Line 3, column 286, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Thiefs
... officer does not care citizen of fear. thiefs are already know of no catch them. T...
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Line 5, column 200, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'dollar' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'dollars'.
Suggestion: dollars
...xample, in Korea, over speed fine is 30 dollar, but if they paid 3000 dollar to pay fi...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'dollar' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'dollars'.
Suggestion: dollars
...ine is 30 dollar, but if they paid 3000 dollar to pay fine, people keep law. In co...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 870.0 1615.20841683 54% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 181.0 315.596192385 57% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80662983425 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26527422036 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.668508287293 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 506.74238477 51% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.5366832056 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 58.0 106.682146367 54% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.0666666667 20.7667163134 58% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.2 7.06120827912 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13689432188 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.049335109666 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593397736585 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0901510770435 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0623128114681 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 13.0946893788 56% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 50.2224549098 152% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 11.3001002004 50% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.73 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.02 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 78.4519038076 41% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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