Many childhood diseases can now be prevented through the use of vaccines.
Should parents be made by law to immunise their children against common diseases or should individuals have the right to choose not to immunise their children?
Today we can prevent nearly all common diseases that people are faced in their early ages.
These disease are not threat to populations anymore. However a big amount number of families do not want to vaccinate their children for such diseases with saying that they have right to not do so.
While we are not living alone but inside a population we can not only think ourselves but the others, too. Human nature requires to be in touch with other and this creates human contact as a result. Children are in contact too and they are the most valuable subject of society because they the future of the society. If children are not immunised they are at risk. So the others at risk too.
One of the duties of the governments is that protect the health of the population. To do this government has to take care of every person who lives in his borders. When a family has its newborn, that newborn is at a lot of health risk and the only way for the government to protect that baby and rest is vaccination to known diseases. If a family resist that they may generate a threat to their baby and to public health.
Being selfish in such issue is not considerable. While government would never like to put its people in a risk and vaccinate with a deadly vaccine, considering that vaccine will be harmful to a kid does not make any sense. This cannot be what parents do.
To sum up, in order to give to every citizen a good start to a life, in my opinion parents can be forced to make their kids are immunised to be protected. People should be educated to make them not to resist this.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, while, as to, as a result, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1302.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.42857142857 5.12529762239 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34347570587 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527210884354 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.5256116365 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.5882352941 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2941176471 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.58823529412 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247964951292 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0756945364017 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0665767389683 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131843906245 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0695918831476 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 13.0946893788 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.12 12.4159519038 65% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.22 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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