In many cities the use of video cameras in public places is being increased in order to reduce crime, but some people believe these measures restrict our individual freedom.
Do the benefits of increased security outweigh the drawbacks?
Surveillance equipments have been increasing in many cities in order to reduce crime but some people
may think these initiatives may decrease their individual freedom. This essay will argue the
advantage of outweighing the disadvantage. The essay will discuss first why people think their individual freedom might be hampered, followed by a discussion of why it is necessary to tackle crime through surveillance
People who are in favor of individual privacy argue that surveillance equipment may destroy their
individual freedom. They believe that they are continuously watched by the government and other private
security organization. The crime which is likely to happen definitely going to happen in the city
whether we install a security camera or not. For instance, ProthomAlo a famous newspaper in Bangladesh
reported that crime rates remain almost the same before installing the surveillance camera in the key area of Dhaka city called Shahbag.
On the other hand, those who are in favor of surveillance camera might bring the following reason.
The first reason, they put is security. When there is a camera available, they believe there is less
likely to chance any disorder as pickpocketing or robbery happens. For example, at Baridhara in
Dhaka almost every road is under CCTV footage which they believe one the reason to reduce crime.
Another reason they always think, if anything serious crime happens, this camera might be the key evidence to prove a crime. For instance, the brutal killing occurred in Borguna which drew us
medias attention very dramatically.
In conclusion, a surveillance camera is necessary to tackle the above-mentioned issues, despite that
some people opposition regarding the installation of CCTV cameras.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 96, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, regarding, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1504.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50915750916 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9102189501 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56043956044 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.3276195778 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.692307692 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.30769230769 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 16.0 4.38176352705 365% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25159575258 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0795908644234 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0758341663974 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0784402475236 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0723281649205 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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