Some people think that universities should provide graduates with the knowledge and skills needed in the workplace. Others think that the true function of a university should be to give access to knowledge for its own sake, regardless of whether the course is useful to an employer.
What, in your opinion, should be the main function of a university?
It is often argued that universities should offer a mechanism so that student can get useful
knowledge and skills which are needed in the workplace. While other schools of thought believe that
it is student responsibility to grab knowledge for their own sake. This essay will discuss both these
views before a reasonable conclusion is drawn. The essay will first discuss functional courses that
will help them to grab a job, followed by a discussion of a more traditional tertiary education.
Some students enroll in a university to have a particular job in mind. In fact, what subject ensure
more security in the future, they are likely to take this subject. For example, a recent study by
The University of Dhaka found that 85% of students are truly likely to get some subjects like- Accounting,
Pharmacy, International Development, etc. which likely to brighten their future career.
However, the first option may not be suitable for everyone and many people have no idea what job
they would like to do when they become graduate. For these kinds of people, it is better to try
more unconventional subjects like Philosophy, International Business might be a better choice.
For example, The New York Times reported that only 50% of law graduates actually want to become lawyers
at the end of their studies.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that, a university should fulfill both these purpose to prepare students for the workforce and provide a system in which a person chooses later what the person likely to pursue in the future career. Whereas other pupils who do not have any specific career choice in mind pick up some unconventional subject
like philosophy.
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... likely to pursue in the future career. Whereas other pupils who do not have any specif...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, however, if, may, so, whereas, while, for example, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1421.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.075 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76469865871 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578571428571 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.275724033 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.307692308 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5384615385 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92307692308 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 15.0 4.38176352705 342% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190743537132 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0666735193709 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.066219755874 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0602604497641 0.151304729494 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0539915311399 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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