In many countries around the world young people decide to leave their parents’ home once they finish school. They start living on their own or sharing a home with friends. Is this a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples. 7.5
In these modern times, it has typically become a worldwide trend for youths to willingly leave their parent’s house for further studies or a job. Experiencing an independent life or sharing a private apartment with a friend has typically become standard practice. In my opinion, staying away from one’s home represent a negative development, which will be discussed further in the underlying paragraphs.
In the first place, undoubtedly living alone has adverse effects on an individual's personal lifestyle. After completing school, most of them opt to work in accomplishing their financial needs, leading them to live away from their folks. People staying away from the warmth of human companionship, tend to become more rigid and suffer emotional distress at times. For instance, a study conducted by the Youth humanity foundation, Vadodara it is clear that the number of suicide rates has increased in young people recently. Furthermore, the study confirms the reason behind this trend is loneliness and depression.
Secondly, when children leave their house, it changes the lives of parents too and eventually impacting society. This social distancing between parents and their children results in a deeply fragmented society. Also, the number of humans living alone increases the cases of depression, Blood pressure, diabetes. For example, deaths due to heart diseases have reached peak levels owing to this lifestyle.
In conclusion, staying away from parents and seeking a job or pursing a higher education is detrimental to an individual as well as society. In my opinion, the decision to leave their progenitors home merely to approach a good future prospect is a negative development.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an individual' or simply 'individuals'?
Suggestion: an individual; individuals
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1445.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45283018868 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91618774145 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62641509434 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 21.4071321321 49.4020404114 43% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 103.214285714 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9285714286 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3571428571 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226495665677 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0714338629424 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0417822484129 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131600779511 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.011937894093 0.056905535591 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.77 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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