In many countries ,people are having health issue.this is due to their unhealthy living.
What are the reason of people choosing unhealthy lifestyle?
What can be done to solve this problem?
It is true that many citizens are facing many health issues because of living a way of life which is detrimental for health. This is happening as people choose to live sedentary life and following unhealthy food habit. Many steps can be taken to alleviate this issue and that shall be discussed in the ensuing paragraphs.
There are multifarious reasons why people choose unhealthy living style.To begin with,people are leading torrid lives. In the cut-throat competition, they work flat out for long hours to achieve success in their professional lives. Due to this they fail to manage time and are not able to cook healthy food for them. Consequently, they end up buying ready-to-eat food or go to restaurants which is not healthy for them. For instant, Pizzahut is a ubiquitous term in all homes.
What is more, these long work hours do not let people to do exercise or meditation as they are exhausted when they reach home. Even when they have leisure time on the weekends, they do not choose to some physical activities. Instead, they choose to play games or do chat on their mobile. To illustrate better, a survey states that number of gym subscriptions has declined in last 5 years after introduction of social media like Facebook in market as people spend many hours scrolling on it.
To mitigate this problem, many steps can be taken. First of all, employers can emphasize on the fitness of their employees by providing them gym area and they should encourage their employees to spend a little amount of the time there. Furthermore, government should spread awareness of doing exercise and having healthy food habits by doing several regional campaigns. Last but another least, it is onus of responsible adults to instill the importance of doing exercise and having healthy food in the young ones so that when they grow as an adult following these good practices.
To summarize, it is irrefutable that health issues are burgeoning due to sedentary lifestyle and unhealthy food habit. However, certain steps can be taken to dimish it by companies, state and definately as an individual.
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- In many countries ,people are having health issue.this is due to their unhealthy living.What are the reason of people choosing unhealthy lifestyle?What can be done to solve this problem? 56
- In many countries ,people are having health issue.this is due to their unhealthy living.What are the reason of people choosing unhealthy lifestyle?What can be done to solve this problem? 73
- In many countries ,people are having health issue.this is due to their unhealthy living.What are the reason of people choosing unhealthy lifestyle?What can be done to solve this problem? 67
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, so, still, first of all, it is true, to begin with, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1747.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 350.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99142857143 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7498140939 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542857142857 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.7063412806 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.1875 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.875 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269795110584 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0815316266128 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0674073127633 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148382308332 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0498461723391 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.