In many countries ,people are having health issue.this is due to their unhealthy living.
What are the reason of people choosing unhealthy lifestyle?
What can be done to solve this problem?
It is true that many citizens are facing many health issues because of living a way of life which is detrimental for health. This is happening as people choose to live sedentary life and following unhealthy food habit. Many steps can be taken to alleviate this issue and that shall be discussed in the ensuing paragraphs.
There are multifarious reasons why people choose unhealthy living style. To begin with,people are leading torrid lives. In the cut-throat competition, they work flat out for long hours to achieve success in their professional lives. Due to this they fail to manage time and are not able to cook healthy food for them. Consequently, they end up buying ready-to-eat food or go to restaurants which is not healthy for them. For instant, Pizzahut is a ubiquitous term in all homes.
What is more, these long work hours do not let people to do exercise or meditation as they are exhausted when they reach home. Even when they have leisure time on the weekends, they do not choose to some physical activities. Instead, they choose to play games or do chat on their mobile. To illustrate better, a survey states that number of gym subscriptions has declined in last 5 years after introduction of social media like Facebook in market as people spend many hours scrolling on it.
To mitigate this problem, many steps can be taken. First of all, employers can emphasize on the fitness of their employees by providing them gym area and they should encourage their employees to spend a little amount of the time there. Furthermore, government should spread awareness of doing exercise and having healthy food habits by doing several regional campaigns. Last but another least, it is onus of responsible adults to instill the importance of doing exercise and having healthy food in the youngones so that when they grow as an adult following these good practices.
To summarize, it is irrefutable that health issues are burgeoning due to sedentary lifestyle and unhealthy food habit. However, certain steps can be taken to dimish it by companies, state and definately as an individual
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- In many countries ,people are having health issue.this is due to their unhealthy living.What are the reason of people choosing unhealthy lifestyle?What can be done to solve this problem? 67
- In many countries ,people are having health issue.this is due to their unhealthy living.What are the reason of people choosing unhealthy lifestyle?What can be done to solve this problem? 56
- In many countries ,people are having health issue.this is due to their unhealthy living.What are the reason of people choosing unhealthy lifestyle?What can be done to solve this problem? 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 86, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , people
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, so, still, first of all, it is true, to begin with, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1745.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9433427762 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71381892091 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538243626062 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0526015037 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.8421052632 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5789473684 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.10526315789 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26586293613 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.086268257637 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0705753913169 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147581585136 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0476768822401 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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