In many countries, people are not taking care of their elderly relatives but seeking the help of professionals to look after them. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Describe your views and give examples from your own life.
Taking the help of caregiver has become common nowadays. People use their services in order to take care of their family members and relatives. In my opinion, this brings ample benefits to both caregiver and caretaker. Therefore I think it is a fully a positive development.
Firstly, these caregivers are well trained in the area of elder management, hence can rest assure regarding their near and dear ones. This means that they are very accurate to look after elder people from morning to night. For instance, one of my friend's father has hired such a service for her mother and he is very delighted by this. The caregiver is so punctual in his timetable from regular meal providing to medicines providing everything happens at precise manner.
Secondly, by utilizing this outsourcing work from others, an individual can heed his/her attention to the core aspect of life such as business or job. She/he can easily concentrate on work without worrying too much about their elder family member or relative. If any person has not taken this kind of service then he may constantly be thinking about the elder member of his family and this can distract him/her adversely the progress of his/her business or job.
Finally, this kind of care-providing facilities creates plenty of job opportunities. Many unemployed workers can work in this sector and earn bread and butter for their family. Furthermore, the government can reinvigorate this area and form some rules to regulate and protect the interest of both the parties. This can boost the job creation in this field and eventually help the economy to grow gradually.
In conclusion, seeking help from professional is certainly a positive development because it not only helps the individual to focus over his/her job or business but also the trained person can give the older people the love and affection, which is essential and required at that particular age.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 220, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...nefits to both caregiver and caretaker. Therefore I think it is a fully a positive develo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, look, may, regarding, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, for instance, i think, in conclusion, kind of, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1611.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08201892744 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7144885868 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596214511041 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.9556673243 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.6875 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8125 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.25 7.06120827912 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220473100569 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0756062467303 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0485802736276 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128102987805 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.032915734673 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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