Nowadays in some countries, children are given fewer responsibilities compared to the past. Some people believe it is a positive development while others argue otherwise.
Discuss both the views. What is your opinion? give reasons and relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.
In recent years, the argument that children should be given more onus or less has sparked the heated debate in some countries. In my opinion, if the children are given more responsibilities in their older days, they can benefit enormously by dealing with those situations. Hence, I think it is a positive development. I will discuss both the argument here in this essay with the reason why it is important for older kids to start taking responsibility.
Admittedly, having fewer onuses on kids make them feel relax and calm. They feel no extra burden, therefore allocating more times studies. This leads to good academic grades and marks, which is very vital for their professional career at the later stage. Another, advantage for having lesser onuses is they have ample time to pursue their hobbies and give full attention to it. Moreover, this gives them chance to nourish their skill to take to professional level. They can make a career by practicing these skills and create name and fame for themselves as well as for the nation.
on the other hand, some people believe, more duties make an individual more responsible and thus, they can grow substantially in all sphere, and I agree. Firstly, having many onuses on shoulder older children can become more multitasking. they will learn how to handle numerals task without losing focus over the core one. Furthermore, this skills makes them competent to work under pressure. For example, one of my cousin sisters used to work as well as study in addition of doing household chores, when she has in her higher secondary school. popular to common belief, she secured the distinction and she proved to play all her role with full dedication. Secondly, more responsibility helps them to occupy their brain over certain activities. As a result, they never be free. Researches have shown that busy mind evolves faster than the empty mind.
In conclusion, people have a different opinion, but according to me, being involved in any activity by taking as your onus, leads you on the track to eventually become a successful person in the long run.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, as for, for example, i think, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1752.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96317280453 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65320098735 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620396600567 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 549.9 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.81724513 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.6 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.65 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.75 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117006052999 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0327208867175 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0401645457833 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0787781230858 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0575491832667 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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