It is irrefutable that delaying university education, for a year, has gained a lot of popularity nowadays before enrolling in college. Clearly, the main benefit is that students can acquire the requisite skills and a potential drawback is lack of interest in academics due to the long gap in education.
To commence with, the most striking merit of this phenomenon is that the time can be utilised to engage in a social activity. By helping other people, it will aid in interpersonal skills such as confidence, communication and positive attitude. Not only this but they will learn life lessons and values such as intelligence, loyalty, and humanity resulting in a better future at the college. Additionally, they get an opportunity to earn and collect money for the college fee. As a consequence, it reduces the financial burden from parents and prevents them from taking extraordinary steps beyond their capacity to arrange funds. For instance, the government of Malaysia has passed guidelines for students to take a year gap in order to become ready for graduation in terms of requisite knowledge and money. Therefore, taking a year off makes a student independent and full of values.
Despite having numerous advantages, there are significant pitfalls that can certainly overwhelm the potential influence of one year gap. First of all, losing academic momentum is the major issue because attendees might lack the habit of going to school and studying. In other words, they might find their break too interesting which will distract them from their path, and end up not wanting to go back to formal education. To substantiate, a 2015 study shows that 30% of students abandon their academic qualification if they delay their studies even for one year. Hence, the more we encourage the delay in education, the more difficult it becomes to go back to the momentum.
To conclude, although the decision to take time off before enrolling into college is good for those who are very serious about their career, proper planning and monitoring is essential to avoid wastage of time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, so, therefore, for instance, such as, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1746.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10526315789 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84419219219 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599415204678 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 557.1 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.0463647354 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.4 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.93333333333 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132906541011 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0428865509528 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0367942397236 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0703257113001 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0291976332303 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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