Many criminals commit further crime as soon as they are released from prison. What do you think are the causes of this? What possible solutions can you suggest?
It is true that crime offender often attempts to crime when they get their foot in society. There are variety of possible reasons for this and the most important one is unemployment status but steps can be definitely taken to tackle the problem such as training prisoners for some skills. This essay will discuss main causes and some suggested solutions for solving it.
In my opinion two main factors are blame for. Firstly, they are usually always jobless. Unemployment condition plays a significant role in motivating for crime. So that they have been tempted to do crime to make money or prove themselves to their near and dear ones. Besides, Society are cynical about them and don’t have any trust on criminals. For instance, one of the main evidences for hiring staffs is their legal evidence which prove that they don’t have any criminal records. To be specific more, if they had a criminal record, they would not be merit to count on them. By this approach, the crime offenders will be moved to the margin of society day in, day out. Eventually, they would be insensible about their compatriots and societies and attempt to crime.
From my perspective, there are also some solutions to solve this social issue. The first and foremost, it is a social obligation of employers to have trust and well treat with ex-offenders rather than exploiting them. To dig a little deeper, owners should give an opportunity to offenders to finding their ways and approving their abilities. I persist that each person has both negative and positive sides in his mindset that negative sides should be overshadowed by upholding of positive side with help of society and himself. Besides, the day of imprisonment are the right time to make jailbirds to wake up from their slumber and stimulant them to fight for sustainable future by taking relevant steps. For aiming this goal, government should stablish organizations to teach prisoners various professions to prepare them for coming to society. I have read in a newspaper that this organization has been established for kids offenders but I think it should be particularly done for adults, too.
Inconclusion, the willing of prisoners to do crime promptly after finishing their penalties has some causes such as being unemployment and distrusting of society to them. While there are some effective solutions to overcome this unpleasant situation like change the old-time and pessimistic view on ex-offenders and also providing a situation to make them expert in each career that they have knack for it.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...h career that they have knack for it.
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, so, well, while, for instance, i think, in fact, such as, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 24.0651302605 208% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2134.0 1615.20841683 132% => OK
No of words: 423.0 315.596192385 134% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04491725768 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53508145475 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72493267132 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 176.041082164 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536643026005 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 664.2 506.74238477 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.2343261958 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.619047619 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1428571429 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85714285714 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 3.9879759519 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153891020552 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0521480979254 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0383480635468 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110977232128 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0376567763161 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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