You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or try to get a job.You think he/she should get a job. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter:
say why she/he would not enjoy going to college.
explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her
suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her
Dear Jack,
I hope this letter finds you in a radiant of health and the best of spirits. I am so sorry for my delaying in replying to you. During these days, I was gauging your situation and your personal traits.
Actually, it is an imperative decision which can affect your ordain. So, we have to consider all aspects before making any decision. If I recall my memory, during our teenage, you got so fed up with study and you used to find a loophole to flee from curricular. I can predict with absolute evidence that attending academical courses couldn’t be impactful for you.
Besides, you were very keen on car and its related issues like luxury cars or antique cars and their difference in power of their motors and so on. From my perspective, if you chose to pursue your dream, you would be successful with no doubt. An obvious argument in its favor is that you were precocious in subjects of car.
I suppose that you can continue in majors related to car such as car exhibition or car repairing. At first you should do an internship at least for four years and during this period you must save your money. After that you could establish a business for your own and your business will be blooming in near future since you have a knack for in issues of car.
I hope my advice could help you to do your best. Please no hesitate for more information. I am waiting to hearing from you.
Best Regards,
Sahar
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, besides, first, if, so, at least, i suppose, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 32.9175257732 152% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 26.3917525773 152% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1163.0 937.175257732 124% => OK
No of words: 259.0 206.0 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.49034749035 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4266278723 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 127.690721649 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598455598456 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 360.0 290.88556701 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0210825562 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.4117647059 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2352941176 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.23529411765 4.34317383033 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175790803747 0.216113520407 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0620633854747 0.0766984524023 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0418340446216 0.0603063233224 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113244259098 0.12726935374 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0266638278576 0.0580467560999 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 8.37731958763 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.17 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.