Many developing countries place a lot of importance in tourism. Why is this? Do you think that this is a positive or negative development?
Tourism is one of the booming sector in many developing countries. GIving more attention and effort to make it possible for other people can lead to many benefits and development in such countries. A lot of attention to the tourism industry has both positive as well as negative impact on the country and people too. I shall discuss both the view in coming paragraphs.
For economic improvement, the tourism industry plays a crucial role in many countries that are on their way to be developed. It can attract people around the world. Local people can get employment and also the country can expand their culture with other countries too. Undeveloped countries could get foreign money as a part of the development and also helps to build a better economy within the country. The world can get to know about the culture, lifestyle of the hosting country. Because of tourism, the government could put more effort and importance to make it more attractive for others. Traveling to such places can be benefited to local hotels, food, and accommodation providers too.
On the other hand, nevertheless, tourism also could create problems in the hosting country, such as pollution, waste of water in some areas where water is about to extinct. The local public might get affected by foreign people's culture and behaviors. Youngsters adopt bad habits from tourists and put themselves in big trouble for a long time. Different cultures might affect the local culture and lead to the bad shape of the developing country. Although the host countries could put some rules and regulations to control their culture, ancient monuments to get spoiled and destroyed by the tourists. There should be strict rules to be followed by tourists and maintained by the local community.
To put in a nutshell, tourism is one of the best option available for those countries, who are trying to become a developed country with an escalating economy with it for the long term. Tourists could get to know more about other cultures, whereas, the local community gets employment with foreign culture exposure.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, nevertheless, so, well, whereas, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1743.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03757225434 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66045603778 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.482658959538 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 534.6 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2919900351 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.7368421053 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2105263158 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.26315789474 7.06120827912 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16525170364 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0559880246386 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.062391612254 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116351519121 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0700798547306 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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