In Many Developing countries, there is a problem with declining quality of air and water from both industry and construction. What means could be taken to prevent this?
Industries and construction site has resulted in a decline in the standard of quality of air and water. Due to this the animal and human life has majorly been affected. In this essay, we will discuss the problems due to the reduction of the air and water quality and also find see few possible solutions for the same.
Recent studies have shown that in the developing countries the standard of the air and water are majorly affected by the industries due to this the animal or human life around the areas of the factories are impacted. The factories usually drain the harmful toxic waste in the rivers nearby rather than treating the waste water and then draining it. For instance, the annual fishery report of river ganga has shown a decrease of the dolphins which was found around 15-20 years back. Apart from the polluting water, harmful gas are also emitted in the atmosphere this has caused majorly impact to the people. People have reported breathing issue and have also raised concern over the acid rains.
To every problem there is a solution. To tackle these issues, the government needs to setup certain quality standard for the industries. Before the waste water is drained in the river, they can be mixed it with chemicals to treat them and then release it in the rivers. By doing this, we will be able to save the ocean creatures. In the northern parts of India, factories have taken up these practices which actually made a significant improvement in the quality of fishes in that area. Hence the farmers now have started fish farming in those areas. In Maharashtra, factories emitting gases in the atmosphere now burn those gases before releasing it in the air. This has reduced the air pollution and thus reduced the breathing issue problem previously been faced by the residents.
To summarise this essay, the industries have polluted the air and water in the countries by emitting acidic water and harmful gases. However, we can overcome this problem by setting up certain good industrial practices which will not harm the animal and human life around the industrial areas.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, hence, however, if, so, then, thus, apart from, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1743.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8687150838 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4157748195 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.491620111732 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 546.3 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.1840836523 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.8333333333 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8888888889 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.22222222222 7.06120827912 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276157854838 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0872617100943 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0771769219413 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183002683167 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0491079744642 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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