You should spend about 40 minutes on this task Write about the following topic Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish Why do you think this is happening What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced Give reasons for your a

Essay topics:

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish.

Why do you think this is happening?

What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

You should write at least 254 words.

Waste generation has adversely increased in the past few years. It is observed that an increase in the population is one of the major reasons for this growth, followed by lack of awareness on how to manage the waste.

Increase in trash has been observed in the recent years due to growth in the population. As the number of people increase they tend to consume more and in return there has been an significant growth in the rubbish which they leave behind. It is usually observed that a high populated city produces more trash in tons per year than they can re-cycle or decompose. China alone has produced the waste 1/3 of the total waste of the world. Another reason for the growth is lack of knowledge on waste management. Few countries do not have adequate facilities or equipment's to re-cycle or decompose the rubbish.

To solve this issues the government can play a vital role in reducing the rubbish. As the increasing population is always been a issue for the society, the government needs to setup authorities who can manage and track the growth in the population. Apart from forming the committees, the government needs to increase the knowledge of waste management. As people are unaware there is a increase in rubbish. The authorities can spread awareness by setting up campaign at different areas in the city. The government should setup places with all the facilities where the waste can be segregated between the one which should be re-cycled or left to decay.

To summarize the above, increase in the waste will always be a problem due to increase in the population and lack of awareness; where the authorities can play a vital role to help and control this issue.

Votes
Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 178, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...nsume more and in return there has been an significant growth in the rubbish which...
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Line 5, column 128, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...he increasing population is always been a issue for the society, the government n...
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Line 5, column 174, Rule ID: CAN_SETUP[1]
Message: Did you mean 'to set up'?
Suggestion: to set up
...e for the society, the government needs to setup authorities who can manage and track th...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 353, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ease the knowledge of waste management. As people are unaware there is a increase ...
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Line 5, column 384, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...agement. As people are unaware there is a increase in rubbish. The authorities ca...
^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, apart from

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1398.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80412371134 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66750792696 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.470790378007 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6179930702 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.2 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.2 7.06120827912 17% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172668449657 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0632414584566 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0457307119271 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102195310129 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0343351347107 0.056905535591 60% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.