Nowadays many people have access to computers on a wide basis and a large number of children play computer games.
What are the negative impacts of playing computer games and what can be done to minimize the bad effects?
The rise in technological advancement in the world has increased usage of computers. People now have access to these machines worldwide including children, tempting them to play computer games. This essay will discuss the problems of playing these games along with solutions to reduce its negative effects.
Nowadays kids accessing these games have health issues such as near sightedness, unhealthy lifestyle etc. This is because children now sit for long hours in front of these screens which not only causes bad eyesight but also obesity problems since they are glued to their seats. Such games has also given rise to negative impacts like addiction problem at such an early stage. These young minds develop an urge to win and excel at computer sports therefore ruining the spirit of sportsmanship in them. A study shows that there has been a rise in addiction levels in kids due to these games.
In short, these negative impacts causes problems in kids development physically, emotionally and mentally.
Parents play an important role and therefore with proper guidance one can minimize these effects. Elders can make sure to limit screen time hours and develop a healthy lifestyle not only for their children but also for themselves as kids learn what they see. An evidence shows that parents spending more time with their little ones are likely to cultivate good habits among their children. These kids are highly active socially and interact more in society. Therefore, certain precautions can be done to reduce these bad effects.
In conclusion, growth of technology not only effects society but also these young kids. Kids can access these machines provided that parents supervise them consequently leading to a fall of these negative impacts.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 290, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'have', 'haven'.
Suggestion: have; haven
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, so, therefore, in conclusion, in short, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1481.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2332155477 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50453022597 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575971731449 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.8825662377 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.5625 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6875 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212276409171 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0696905948813 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0615835313468 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11661744253 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0625206998668 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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