many elderly people are no longer look after by their families but put in care homes and nursing homes. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend.
The trend of nursing homes taking care of elderly people is quite common to see these days. Although, these care homes give the best medical care to them but unfortunately they could not take the place of a family. In this essay I will look at various advantages and disadvantages of nursing homes and care homes looking after elderly people and offer a logical conclusion.
There are many advantages of nursing homes such as in this busy lifestyle, family members hardly have any time to take care of elders. To overcome this problem, we have care-homes. These care homes not only offer the better medical care but also provide personal attention required by people at this age of life. Another significant benefit of nursing homes is that the nurses are well-educated in medical field as compared to family members, hence they could manage perfect diet chart and routine medical checkup which could not be possible at home.
However, we cannot over look the disadvantages of nursing homes. The main drawback of admitting elderly people to care homes is that they miss their family and feel home-sickness which further negatively impact their health. Another major negative impact of care homes is that the nurses and other staff members are not emotionally attached with their patients, thus they ill treat them most of the time. As an example, recently a daughter installed a spy camera in her mother's room to monitor the behavior of nurse and shocked to see that the nurse not only badly behaved but even beat her mother.
In conclusion, nursing homes are boom for the families where all the members are working and thus could not take care of elder members. It provides the benefits of proper medical and personal attention. However, it has some drawbacks as well, like home-sickness felt by elderly people and they sometimes become victim of misbehavior and ill-treatment by the care home staff members. To some extent, we can overcome these drawbacks by regular and routine visits to these care homes.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... people and offer a logical conclusion. There are many advantages of nursing hom...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, look, so, thus, well, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1680.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97041420118 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51772888134 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.505917159763 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 550.8 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.6790952793 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.0 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5333333333 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.418859971167 0.244688304435 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15887136787 0.084324248473 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0992482662039 0.0667982634062 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.278344974886 0.151304729494 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0700561549584 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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