Many foods are shipped from far away. Some people think that eating local food is more environmentally and economically. Do you think the advantages outweigh its disadvantages?
Now a days the famous food from any country is available all over the world. The import and export systems are largely grown these days compare to olden days. Although many people believe that eating local food is having benefits such as its environmentally friendly and can get in reasonable price which is acceptable. According to me, I agree to the given statement and my incline is justified in the following paragraphs.
Out of all arguments, the strongest one is to prove my view is the in terms of transport, which will impact the environment. We need to use the transport systems either by road way using vehicles, by planes or by ships. Hence, the air pollution or water pollution will happen which impact the environment and leading to global warming. I personally saw one of my friends every month he travels to his village and bring his monthly needs from his village such as Rice, dals and spices which takes around 12 hours journey he uses the goods vehicle for transport the items.
The other reason to prove my point is the following quote “when you are in Roman be like a Roman “which means if you’re staying in any place be like the people stay there, eat what they people around you eating, wear the clothes what the people around you wearing and so on. The locally available items always will be cheaper than the imported items in my case last year when I was staying in Jakarta the Indian ingredients are expensive then the local product particularly Rice, fruits and spices.
Thus, to wrap up the discussion, it can be said that despite that consuming food shipped from far away is not as economically and eco-friendly as using local food.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: goods'; good's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, so, then, thus, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1388.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73720136519 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50697404637 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607508532423 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.32613667 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.181818182 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6363636364 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.09090909091 7.06120827912 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201959805289 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0703479878126 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0905455884824 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141069997763 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0915792867674 0.056905535591 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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