newspapers for several reasons. Firstly, for example, the fact that Princess Diana is
going out with a sportsman is not important news. Secondly, if newspapers want
to publish articles about famous people they should focus on their public events and
achievements. In other words,
if there is an article about Princess Diana it should be about her works of charity,
which will increase public awareness of important problems. In addition, journalists
should make sure that they write about the facts only, not rumours. One should
be able to rely on newspapers for the actual truth.
Magazines, on the other hand, focus on social news. But I feel it is more
acceptable for them to contain some features about famous personalities. In addition to
being popular reading, these stories often benefit the stars by giving free publicity
to them, thereby helping their careers. However, I also believe that magazine stories
should not mention things that are too embarrassing or untrue just to attract people
to buy the magazine.
Sensational stories, such as these, cause great unhappiness to the people
concerned.
In conclusion, I think newspapers should concentrate on real news but magazines can feature some articles on people's private life
- In many workplaces online communication is getting more common than meeting face to face Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages 41
- Some people think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences Others however believe there are better alternative ways of reducing crime Discuss both views and give your opinion 60
- Some educationalists say that every child should be taught how to play a musical instrument To what extent do you agree or disagree 78
- The graph below presents the employment patterns in the USA between 1930 and 2010 Summarise the information by selecting and report in the main features and make comparisons where relevant Write at least 150 words
- Many newspapers and magazines feature stories about the private lives of famous people We know what they eat where they buy their clothes and who they love We also often see pictures of them in private situations Is it appropriate for a magazine or newspa 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Newspapers
newspapers for several reasons. Firstly, for examp...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, for example, i feel, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1069.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 199.0 315.596192385 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37185929648 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68172268791 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.668341708543 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 315.9 506.74238477 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.6136725835 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.0833333333 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5833333333 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.5 7.06120827912 191% => OK
Paragraphs: 16.0 4.38176352705 365% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243577991403 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0825933964513 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0556351243507 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.069155206658 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0604233089286 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.57 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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