Many people are spending their free time watching movies. Why is this? Is it a good or bad thing?
These days increased number of individuals opt to view movies as their preferred leisure activity. There are myriads of reasons for choosing movies over other activities. I think this preference has more drawbacks than the benefits.
The predominant factor is growing numbers of cinemas and theaters. All most all the modern building have developed cinemas inside, with all the necessary facilities like comfortable seat, sound affect, huge screen and eating areas. Due to this people feel relax while watching movies and more individuals are attracted towards this. Apart from this, technology advancement is also a contributing factor. Films are being shooted by the modern cameras and many special effects are added to make them more attractive and eye catching. Stories are narrated in extremely interactive manner. Therefore, number of views or audience of cinemas are increasing continuously.
However, utilizing spare time on watching movie is not a wise decision. It will be much better if folks undertake the activities which involve some physical movement, rather than just sitting idle for two hours. Hobbies like playing, swimming and travelling provide better experience and knowledge especially to young minds. Moreover, movies nowadays are not conveying any social message. Many a time it display useless content which may effect viewer in negative manner. Youngsters and teenagers get attracted towards violence by watching action scenes. Hence, it will be better to get involve in other useful activities which are helpful in providing physical and mental growth.
In conclusion, unequivocally movies are successful in attracting huge audience and its popularity has been continuously increasing, but after deep analysis it can be ascertain that it has adverse outcomes and people try to focus on other areas of interest.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, while, apart from, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1568.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56028368794 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76917434318 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.677304964539 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.9617903475 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.1111111111 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6666666667 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119195057857 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0355662261894 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0470122695275 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0613238344668 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0235279132344 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.33 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.67 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.92 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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