Many people believe that social networking sites (facebook) have had a huge negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree.
It is common knowledge that social media platforms have an adverse effect on local communities. I strongly believe that the craving of being online always is changing the way people communicate with each other, leading to anxiety and depression. In the following essay, I will first highlight the ill effects of social media on human health and follow it up with why we should exercise caution while using the internet.
To commence with, humans were always meant to be social, they were meant to meet, interact, discuss, debate, share their views, concerns, happiness and sadness with each other. With the advent of the internet, the social activity of humans has been taken from the offline to the online world. The lack of meeting people physically, talking to each other verbally, understanding emotions has created a void in the hearts and is leading to the deterioration of human health. This is easily proved by the spurt of cases of people suffering from anxiety-related mental illnesses which are actually ironical considering that technology was considered(envisaged) to have brought people closer. Man requires social interaction and changing the medium to something convenient like the internet is proving detrimental.
Although the internet has proved to be a boon for most, it has its fair share of problems. It is easy to impersonate and trap unsuspecting teenagers and senior citizens. Today’s news is full of crimes related to finance, relationships, harassment and abductions which are perpetuated over the internet. It is better to be safe than sorry and hence we should exercise caution online.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, hence, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1369.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28571428571 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95732733166 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6138996139 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.561964632 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.083333333 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5833333333 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 7.06120827912 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0803299453838 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0289359562893 0.084324248473 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0264537487039 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0516590644233 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0365858585812 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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