Many people believe that social networking sites (facebook) have had a huge negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree
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It is common knowledge that social media platforms have an adverse effect on local communities. I strongly believe that the craving of being online always is changing the way people communicate with each other, leading to anxiety and depression. In the following essay, I will first highlight the ill effects of social media on human health and follow it up with why we should exercise caution while using the internet.
To commence with, humans were always meant to be social, they were meant to meet, interact, discuss, debate, share their views, concerns, happiness and sadness with each other. With the advent of the internet, the social activity of humans has people physically, talking to each other verbally, understanding emotions has created a void in the hearts and is leading to the deterioration of human health. This is easily proved by the spurt of cases of people suffering from anxiety-related mental illnesses which are actually ironical considering that technology was considered(envisaged) to have brought people closer. Man requires social interaction and changing the medium to something convenient like the internet is proving detrimental.
Although the internet has proved to be a boon for most, it has its fair share of problems. It is easy to impersonate and trap unsuspecting teenagers and senior citizens. Today’s news is full of crimes related to finance, relationships, harassment and abductions which are perpetuated over the internet. It is better to be safe than sorry and hence we should exercise caution online.
In conclusion, I strongly agree that social media is a vice which should be used with caution in order to ensure the well being of humans. Though It gives people a sense of freedom to talk around the world, it has severe negative effects, as most of the people opt to talk using technology due to their busy lifestyle, which increases the distance in their relationship
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...to their busy lifestyle, which increases the distance in their relationship
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, hence, if, so, well, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1621.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19551282051 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92375387452 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580128205128 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.1794808795 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.692307692 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.46153846154 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100315448473 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0348866025049 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0280607441218 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0605134642653 0.151304729494 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0349690402429 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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