Many people believe that the use of new technology improves the lives of employees. Others think it is a disadvantage for them. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
New technological advancements in the last couple of decades have resulted in a lot of debates about the uses, merits and demerits in different facets of life. A part of the working population is of the impression that gadgets and gizmos are advantageous to work whereas others think it is detrimental. There are rational arguments to both these views.
On one hand, people believe that technology assists and streamlines redundancies in the working of an organization. For instance, daily menial aspects of a job like data entry can be completed much faster and more efficiently using the marvels of new technology. Moreover, it also reduces paper usage for logging of information which in turn helps save the planet from deforestation.
On the other hand, some people think that modern advancements such as smartphones and improved computers affect productivity as it provides an employee with more channels of distractions. Furthermore, technology has made work increasingly monotonous and less creative. Additionally, due to the high level of dependency on machines and associated technologies, the lack thereof causes work to come to a standstill.
However, in my opinion, technological advancements have given today's employees more flexibility compared to an employee who worked before the use of technology. For instance, employees enjoy the option to work from home and flexible work hours which was not a prevalent option before. Additionally, redundant and mundane work has been either digitalized or automated due to technology and thus helps employees focus on issues that truly help organizations grow.
In conclusion, there are a lot of valid and justifiable arguments to both sides of the controversy. It is my opinion that improved technology has immense advantages for the working class. However, the method of utilization of technology dictates whether it is good or bad for working lives.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, still, thus, whereas, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1623.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42809364548 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20614573543 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585284280936 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9530633221 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.2 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9333333333 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.2 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182608051813 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0638716571111 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0422386442549 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10742037377 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0307404126401 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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