Write a letter to your local council about the improvement of tourist facilities in your area. Include the following in your letter:
- What are the current tourist facilities in your area?
- What are the benefits tourism brings to local community?
- Suggest improvements that need to be done, in your opinion
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am wiring to suggest you some recommendation with regard to our regional tourism industry. As you know, tourism is considered a high potential for promoting the economy.
To begin, it souled be mentioned that currently there are some tourist attractions in our area. The clean coastline and those beach-restaurants and clubs are able to create some pure joy for people. Also, there are some hotels, however, they are not five stars but offer some high-quality services.
Needless to say, tourism is considered as a successful way of making money and most of the countries around the world are investing in this field. One of several accomplishments because of the well-developed tourism industry is the more job opportunities for local people which causes the reduction of financial problems. Local shops, small businesses, and regional markets would be active and many local laborers who have to immigrate to other cities or even other countries will find jobs in their hometowns.
In my opinion, the best way to develop our tourism industry is to construct some high-level hotels with many attractive options such as outdoor and indoor pools, cinema, private beach, equipped gym, and UALL services. Also, it is a helpful idea to publish some adverts on corresponding magazines and websites.
I hope my suggestion would be of assistance.
Thank you for your consideration.
Yours Faithfully,
Yalda Asgari.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir/ Madam, I am wiring to suggest you some recommen...
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Line 13, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...your consideration. Yours Faithfully, Yalda Asgari.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, so, well, such as, you know, in my opinion, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1219.0 937.175257732 130% => OK
No of words: 229.0 206.0 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3231441048 4.54256449028 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00418908787 2.54303337028 118% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.655021834061 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 375.3 290.88556701 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.1048258111 44.8134815571 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.7692307692 76.5299724578 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6153846154 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 4.34317383033 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123152186321 0.216113520407 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0493862806193 0.0766984524023 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525321098267 0.0603063233224 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0573414996938 0.12726935374 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0406953816906 0.0580467560999 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 8.37731958763 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.28 8.71597938144 152% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 7.59969072165 123% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 41.2886597938 172% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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