Many people prefer to spend money and not save it. what are the reasons? Is this a positive or negative development?
A number of people prefer to spend money rather than saving it. This essay will argue that captivating advertisements and the influence of peers are the biggest reasons behind this phenomenon. In my opinion, it is a positive development as long as wealth is spent wisely.
The main reason behind spending a substantial amount of finance is the attractive commercials. That is to say, people are more dependent on media these days, which exposes them to the adverts represented hastily, and they cannot stop following it and shell out money on various kinds of goods and services. A recent study has shown that about 65% of individuals buy things after watching them on social media. Apart from this, humans are more affected by the surrounding masses. In other words, if any person buys a product that seems appealing, others will definitely make efforts to purchase that particular piece to show others that they are from the elite class even they do not need it.
In my view, devoting a limited amount to accessing items is definitely a good idea. As employees work around the clock to
lead a luxurious life, they should use their funds to acquire all facilities for their comfort. However, one should not payout on
useless utilities because saving a budget is essential to use them in emergencies that occur owing to unexpected events.
For example, in the case of medical treatment, a person might have to need a large sum of cash to treat themselves well which
might not be possible without having savings.
On balance, the trend of using funds on appropriate things is burgeoning these days. Promotion of objects and effect of friends are the foremost reasons for this. I believe that it is a positive development which helps people to lead a better life. Nevertheless, one should ensure that one has a proper amount of backup to use on sudden accidents.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, nevertheless, so, well, apart from, for example, in my opinion, in my view, in other words, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1563.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91509433962 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64029059931 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600628930818 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.1122330186 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.6875 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.875 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4375 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.38176352705 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212948040032 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0696189183086 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0857987860593 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0770895523606 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116429294141 0.056905535591 205% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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