The development in technology allows more and more machines to be used rather than human employees. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
It is claimed that the advancement in technology has given rise to the usage of machines instead of working by humans. This essay will argue that the advantages of this outweigh the drawbacks. This essay will demonstrate that machines make the working process faster and provide more accurate results, followed by an analysis of how the primary disadvantage, namely the complication of unemployment is not valid.
The main reason for working through an automated device is time-saving. That is to say that these units work without taking breaks and processing speed is higher because these operate on the basis of programmed information that might not be possible in the case of human beings as they need rest and get bored easily. For example, in Amazon's automated project, people revealed that AI-based robots check 600 to 700 boxes per hour, which is 10% higher than the work done by an individual. Apart from this, appliance precise information. As masses use the brain to perform any activity, and there are more chances to commit a mistake, whereas these devices run according to the encoding algorithm, where the chance of inaccuracy is negligible. Taking a calculator as an example, it can solve complex calculations without errors that might not be possible for a common person.
Those opposed to this say that this trend causes a lack of employment. In other words, automated instruments are replacing the workers, which left humans without jobs. However, it is impossible to operate apparatus without the intervention of people, thus employees play an indispensable role in any organization where a large fraction of work is carried out with the help of robots. Moreover, from time to time maintenance and up-gradation of these machines can only be done by an individual. A recent study has shown that introduction of robots in the field has boosted employment vistas.
On balance, the fact that time-saving and precision of outcomes are the two crucial benefits that outweigh the flawed argument that it creates the hurdle of unemployment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, moreover, so, thus, whereas, apart from, for example, in other words, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1726.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15223880597 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85283817909 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579104477612 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 545.4 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.5161767343 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.066666667 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190130588274 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0565528834513 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0451716505199 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102851691859 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0587244826502 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.72 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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