Many people say that the only way to guarantee a good job is to complete a course of university education.
Others claim that it is better to start work after school and gain experience in the world of work.
Discuss both view.
Even though a minority vocalizes that it is advantageous to embark work after high secondary in order to grab experience, majority believes that tertiary education acts as a milestone in life which paves the path of bright career ahead. While get acquaint with working culture immediate after school instill countless pragmatic skills, I cogitate that university education essential for holistic development of people.
Exposure to work in salad years would inculcate several practical traits which is imperative to thrive in the highly competitive epoch. Seemingly, when individuals immediately enter into working ambience, they observe the actions of their immediate superior and start imbibing their style of work, gradually this replication of actions turn them exceptionally talented people. Also, it is biased to overlook the facts documented by American Employment Council that those individuals who do not pursue college education and commence working after school are well versed with practical competencies. However, I believe that working in tender age would make them status quo.
On the other hand, since academic world impart profound knowledge and instill innumerable skills in students, they have wonderful opportunities in real world. Lecturers at university provide in-depth knowledge to pupils about subjects through their interactive sessions and polish their hidden talents by arranging suitable internship programs in several industries. To exemplify, as per survey conducted by Times Magazines that college graduates are more armed with essential practical skills and knowledge as compared to non-graduates students. Therefore, I believe that university education is necessary for the overall development of people and in order to achieve outstanding success in contemporary era.
In conclusion, although practical working experience is quite conductive in learning skills, tertiary education excel the pupils in
every field and make them highly talented task force.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, second, so, still, therefore, well, while, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1715.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.91379310345 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89269242076 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641379310345 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 543.6 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.0888470043 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.909090909 106.682146367 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3636363636 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.09090909091 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200673792738 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0725972645316 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0377529020839 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0986450797129 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0564021446509 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.6 13.0946893788 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 19.71 50.2224549098 39% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.0 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.29 12.4159519038 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.64 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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