Many people still believe that riding a bicycle is the best way to get to places.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of using a bicycle these days?
It is commonly believed by many people that cycle is the most appropriate mode of traveling from one place to another, even in the current era. There are plethora of pros and cons of cycling.
Talking about the benefits of riding a bicycle. The most prominent one is that it is beneficial for the health of the rider. When a person uses it, this requires to use physical strength of the body. As a result, it embraces the stamina level of the individual who rides. In other words, cycling makes a person to do physical exertion since it entails motion of all body parts. Therefore, it helps users to keep themselves fit and active. For instance, a recent survey revealed that 70% of the respondents said they prefer to commute to various places using cycle.
However, there are drawbacks to cycling as well. One predominant is that it cannot be used for long distances. As riding the cycle entails using power of the body, especially paddling can make feet and legs strain by putting pressure on these. Therefore, it cannot be used to travel to distant places. To exemplify, I had to stop using this mode of transport while going to another city because I started to have muscle strains when I drove it the whole day.
To conclude, many people hold an opinion that using the bicycle to go from one place to another still is a preferable mean because it brings health benefits, but it cannot be used when distance to travel is a long one as it would result in worn out of muscles of the rider. It is recommended that this should be used on a regular basis for short travels.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 163, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'using'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: using
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, still, therefore, well, while, for instance, talking about, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1304.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57543859649 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44174730186 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557894736842 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 57.143699073 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.5 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8125 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8125 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17654456795 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0462994303284 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0458655325782 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103824739229 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0363680678637 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 12.4159519038 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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