Young people in the workforce today are changing their jobs every few years.
What are the reasons for this?
Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
It is commonly observed nowadays that young individuals are frequently switching jobs. They do this for certain reasons which very person to person. I believe this has more benefits.
To begin with, one prominent cause which persuades people to change their employers after some years us that it provides them personal and professional growth. New organization would offer these people a good pay rise and a better grade as compared to the one where they are presently working. But, if they had stayed at the same place, it would have been not possible to promote to upper position and receive 40% increase in the salary after one or two years. For instance, my ex-colleague swapped bank each year and after three years, he got accumulated increase in the pay as 60% whereas employees who have been staying at the same bank their salary increased only by 24% in the same period.
Talking about whether the merits are more or less, I believe it has less demerits. One significant benefit is that adults get exposure and experience as a result of working for various companies. As different practices are being implemented across different industries, this would enable him or her to learn new skillsets and polish previous ones. To narrate, I learnt how to perform a particular task by using different approaches when I switched banks in the last five years three times. However, the one prominent drawback of changing jobs rapidly one after another is that employee is not entitled to the long term fringe benefits offered by an employer such as gratuity. Most of the organizations start gratuity entitlement when a staff has worked for more than three years. Therefore, a worker would not receive the long term financial reward, if he did not work for ten or fifteen years for the same employer.
To conclude, young adults at the present switch jobs for earning high salary and to obtain a better position. Although they won't be getting financial benefits at retirement, I believe the benefits of learning new skills are more.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun demerits is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, therefore, whereas, for instance, such as, talking about, as a result, more or less, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1700.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95626822157 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60400290251 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594752186589 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4920634817 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.25 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4375 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155664132773 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0512672618943 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0407036964812 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100806219061 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0374604480726 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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