Some parents and teachers think that children’s behavior should be strictly controlled. While some think that children should be free to behave. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In the recent era, many people are concerned about the attitude of young children. It is commonly believed by a few parents and school instructors of them that there should be a stringent control on whatever children do. However, others are of the view that they ought to be allowed freedom to behave, however they want. I believe that some guidance is vital to teach them certain etiquette.
To begin with, mother, father and mentors who believe that children’s way of acting should be tightly supervised do so because they hold an opinion that they do not have good etiquette's when they are at early age. Therefore, they should be taught how to behave in certain situations. These young people are learning and are vulnerable, it is crucial to teach them. What they see around them, try to copy that because they cannot distinguish good acts from the bad ones. For instance, many parents in Asian countries keep eyes on their offsprings’ actions since they think they can teach them good manners by doing so. However, I believe this thing makes them rebellion sometimes so they should be allowed some free-hand.
On the other hand, other group of parents and pedagogues are of the view that children should be left free to behave in any way they want. This is because if they are given instructions every now and then, it is likely that they will naturally become disobedient. Whereas, if they were be given liberty, they would try to listen to their elders rather than disobeying. This is so because humans naturally posses this trait that they try to repel what is being imposed on them. To exemplify, my parents always left us free to behave on our own. Consequently, it did not make us rebellious to them, but they were always there to guide us whenever we misbehaved. Hence, I believe that children should be given freedom with some supervision.
To conclude, as strict control on children can make them disobedient, I believe they should be allowed to behave as they want with some guidance from parents and teachers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 187, Rule ID: EVERY_NOW_AND_THEN[1]
Message: Use simply 'now and then'.
Suggestion: now and then
... because if they are given instructions every now and then, it is likely that they will naturally ...
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Line 9, column 287, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...come disobedient. Whereas, if they were be given liberty, they would try to listen...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, hence, however, if, so, then, therefore, whereas, for instance, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 13.1623246493 198% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 60.0 24.0651302605 249% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1700.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 351.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8433048433 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58299152071 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509971509972 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 5.43587174349 258% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7806827947 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.4444444444 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38888888889 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245649086669 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0984797240587 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0832927727803 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193617560829 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0244881657328 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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