Many people these days travel far for work or spend more hours working. Does this trend have advantages or disadvantages? What do you think about work-life balance?
Nowadays, a plentiful number of working professionals are working long hours or traveling miles away to go to work. However, even though this practice would make them earning better, but there are several destructive benefits with this kind of pattern. In this essay, I will discuss the demerits of this ongoing trend along with defining the balancing of professional and personal life in my views.
Apparently, various factors make a section of society advocate that working long hours or traveling far distances for work have two prime disadvantages in an adult's life. First and foremost is fact that many people who are following the pattern of working overtime at their offices are affected by their personal lives. To illustrate, many of the freshers in companies are giving their every ounce of energy to work overtime and learn about the corporate world in their respective sectors. In this way, they spend most of the time at their offices with colleagues instead of spending time with their loved ones. This kind of habit affects their social relationships with their family, friends, and if the person is married, it will affect his relationship with their partners. Secondly, another flaw comes from a professional career. Since every person has their future endeavors, but not all of them achieve their goals because of working too long at their firms. Because they fail to concentrate at their jobs and take longer to finish their tasks. This kind of result declines the graph of working professionals' productivity in their careers and they end up not achieving their goals. Additionally, it also affects the health of an individual while working too long. Thus, I believe that the above two reasons would have explained the cons of working too long whether traveling for work or spending more time at companies.
In my opinion, the work-life balance simply means striking a healthy balance between a person's working life and personal life. Everyone should learn the main skill of work-life balance that is time management. If people are able to handle the flawless skills of time management, they will rock-solid to maintain the work-life balance. Although I understand some people do not like to follow a schedule in their lives, I think it is the only way to maintain a healthy balance between personal and professional lives.
To conclude, although people are working late in terms of traveling far from work or doing overtime at their firms, it has more downside than the upside in both of the work-life and personal life. Therefore, a better work-life balance needs to be followed among these working professionals by maintaining a daily time-table which will result in numerous benefits such as healthy, physically fit, maintaining good social relationships with their loved ones, and at last but not the least their smooth road to incline their professional careers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'adults'' or 'adult's'?
Suggestion: adults'; adult's
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'professionals'' or 'professional's'?
Suggestion: professionals'; professional's
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a person' or simply 'persons'?
Suggestion: a person; persons
...eans striking a healthy balance between a persons working life and personal life. Everyon...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, i think, kind of, such as, in my opinion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 24.0651302605 208% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 72.0 41.998997996 171% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2424.0 1615.20841683 150% => OK
No of words: 473.0 315.596192385 150% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12473572939 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66353547975 4.20363070211 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68986423014 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 176.041082164 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.505285412262 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 740.7 506.74238477 146% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.347129321 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.2 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.65 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.05 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.360122783703 0.244688304435 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133369487505 0.084324248473 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101033215412 0.0667982634062 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.25147192091 0.151304729494 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0176058974869 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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