Many believe that the things which are of great importance to people do not have a cost. I completely disagree with this statement and think otherwise.
Firstly, it is important to understand that humans have naturally varied preferences based on their personality types. Some value the materialistic things, whereas other emotional attachments, matter the most such as love and affection. There is no one thing that can fulfill the dare need of these different types of personalities because of their variable requirements. For example, one would probably wish to have an exotic car, while others want to be in love with someone. In this example, it is evident that both have different needs and one of them needs money to make his dream of getting a fancy car come true. Hence, it is evident that not all the valuable things are free for everyone.
Secondly, meaning and understanding of most valued things are different for people belonging to different social classes of society. It is can be seen from the famous Maslow’s hierarchy of needs that underprivileged and homeless citizens will always rate the need for food, shelter and basic clothing higher, over affection and intimacy because this is what keeps them alive. Whereas, on the other side rich and upper class strives to get recognized in society by giving importance to luxury items such as expensive and branded clothes and tall buildings. Both classes have completely different priorities and come with monetary value.
In conclusion, generalizing this statement over the mass that most important things for everyone are free would not do justice because individuals have different preferences needs in different situations, and not all valuable and important things are free of charge.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, whereas, while, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1487.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23591549296 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80662518191 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56338028169 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.3487889801 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.384615385 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8461538462 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.69230769231 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218500026331 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0832311192109 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0670188779282 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172430943696 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0805909213126 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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