People often confuse that having lot of money is highway for happiness. On contrary, I believe surplus wealth is root cause for all problems. Surely, we can do many things with the help of currency but every problem cannot be solved by the same way. I personally believe, content is what guarantees happiness and compassion, love, friends make our life beautiful. In this essay I will discuss different aspects which will cheer us better than money.
As Billy Graham quotes ‘’When wealth is lost, nothing is lost; when health is lost, something is lost; when character is lost, all is lost.’’ It means there is no reason to worry if we lost some amount as there are chances to re-gain financially. However, we cannot same to health and character. Therefore, it’s really important to take care of one’s health as suffering from illness is not a wishful life. Since, society judges a person to his deeds rather than the wealth he possesses it’s better to build good character. Renowned Social worker and Nobel prize winner Mother Theresa was said to be happiest person on earth ever lived. Nevertheless, economic viability is must but only to an extent of our needs and delight comes from sharing with our loved ones. Several scholars believe that Man should be master of money he invented but not the other way around.
On the other hand, excess money invites many other problems like security issues, tensions and encourages lazy behaviour in humans. Profits and incomes needed to be saved as modern banking is vulnerable because of online threats are increasing day by day. This leads to mental stress of protecting assets and will search various modes to invest for instance land and gold. Needless, to say that a rich person has no reason to work hard like others as anything he needs is at his arm’s length. Thus, creativity and curiosity diminish as brain does not have functional growth and limited to merely body mechanisms. Real happiness lies in caring the society we live in and to contribute to public by various charities. Infact, many corporate organisations like Wipro, TATA encourages their employees and actively involve in participating various social work. As per psychologists, for a sound mind, one need to search happiness within them but not by materialistic possession of goods.
To summarise, true value of life is not in bank balances, properties but happy moments we treasure with our memories. Whether rich or poor, without our beloved one’s, surviving is bleak and cannot fulfil our deep senses with piles of cash. Live and let live is key to happiness.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Message: Did you mean 'its' (possessive pronoun) instead of 'it's' (short form of 'it is')?
Suggestion: its
...eds rather than the wealth he possesses it’s better to build good character. Renowne...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'be the happiest'.
Suggestion: be the happiest
...prize winner Mother Theresa was said to be happiest person on earth ever lived. Neverthele...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, nevertheless, really, so, therefore, thus, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2171.0 1615.20841683 134% => OK
No of words: 436.0 315.596192385 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97935779817 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56953094068 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58620724846 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 274.0 176.041082164 156% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628440366972 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 660.6 506.74238477 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6757652933 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.3913043478 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9565217391 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119912164253 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0336254227909 0.084324248473 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0493820835405 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0733211077011 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0555813514694 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 78.4519038076 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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