Many people think that regions affect successful person. What is your opinion about native region and accomplished person’s influence on the region he belongs to?
In today's world, people are motivated and driven to push boundaries and explore better opportunities nearby or in faraway places. Whether a person’s success depends on his native regions or not is the epicentre of discussion in multiple forums and a conclusive unanimous agreement is yet to be achieved. This essay goes with a complete disagreement with the statement and puts forth arguments followed by a plausible conclusion.
There are myriad arguments in favour of my stance. The paramount one is that achieving success in life depends on many factors such as determination, hard work, clear visions of your goals and ambitions. Support from friends and family also play an important part. Being in a good and cohesive environment is undoubtedly beneficial, however, a person who is disciplined and determined to achieve his goals will find ways to his success no matter where ever he is.
Another pivotal aspect in favour of this argument is that success means earning a respectable position, monetary gains and a secured future, which can only be attained by sheer hard work and dedication. Moreover, people those who have marked themselves as examples for others have burnt the midnight oil for reaching desired positions. To illustrate, people like, Bill Gates, Ratan Tata, APJ Abdul Kalam and list goes on with other eminent personalities, who are the perfect cases of successful leaders in their respective fields.
To recapitulate, the foregoing discussion propounds the view that the connections to native regions and accomplishments have a very trivial effect in overall success stories of any person. Basic fundamentals will remain static and identical to achieve success.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 190, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'fundamentals'.
Suggestion: Fundamentals
... overall success stories of any person. Basic fundamentals will remain static and identical to ach...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1433.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34701492537 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95470323697 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.667910447761 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.8337933734 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.416666667 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 7.06120827912 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20581144521 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0621931611902 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.075650880529 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123453978222 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0614430009614 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.15 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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