Children can learn effectively by watching tv therefore they should be encouraged at home and at school. To what extent do you agree or disagree..
Without a shadow of a doubt television is most popular among all age groups not from now but from many decades. A few people suggests that we should give support to kids to watch television daily not only at home but also in school, because they learn so many things by themselves. Somewhere, I am not fully agree with this. I consider that this views has more bad effects than good .
First of all, now a days there are lots of channel like discovery science and folk based channels , these kind of programme enhance your knowledge and few news channels aware us about things happened in world . But all these benefits are limited. We used television only for our entertainment.
Secondly , to allow television in school and at home not a precise idea . A study shows that your brain can aaffect badly if you spend longer time in front of screen. Nevertheless, brightness and rays can damage your eyesight. In school if kids will watch television then they less tend to writing and reading activities. They may never interested in books. Moreover, screening time effects on health because kids will not like to go outside for play, which can cause obesity and lack of strength . The major draw back is kids can not enhance social communications skill and being a introvert person in future.
To conclude , I strongly believe that this idea has more disadvantages than advantages. We should not collaborate study and television together. It is better that we used television at home only for entertainment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, then, kind of, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1258.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89494163424 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69241187903 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622568093385 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 383.4 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.3610880825 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.0 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1176470588 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88235294118 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201795829324 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.059380815638 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0605826242384 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110391820335 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0738969928748 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.49 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.96 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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