Some people believe they should keep all the money, they have earned and should not pay tax to the state. Do you agree or disagree?
Every government institution stands on tax payee. Quite a few people consider that they will not pay their hard earning money to the government and keep it for themselves. I mediate on this opinion and find i completely disagree with that. in the next paragraph i will discuss about this.
First of all i will discuss the reason why i disagree with this. As we know our government provide us infrastructure, industries, transport facilities, health centres and plethora of services. We enjoyed all without any concern that how they produce it. it might a few people assumed that these all things happened without any cost but they forget that we should always pay for better facilities directly or in the form of tax. Our administration always needs a good amount to thrive the economy and so they depends on different kinds of taxes. Whatever, we except from them for that we have to pay for that.
Secondly think what happened if we not pay taxes to government. In that condition balance of payment will go to negative because government will spend money on lots of schemes but they have no way to earn that. This leads to economy in worse situation. Abruptly growths surrounding with hurdles which are untangle. Citizens have to pay for every services and can’t enjoy any scheme. Day by day it is effect on infrastructure and of course in our pocket also.
It is seemingly that the idea of keep your money only for your own is not sound.
To conclude every responsible citizen must pay income tax for the growth for our country and every common people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, of course, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 24.0651302605 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1292.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6203616955 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577205882353 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.6545434504 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.7777777778 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1111111111 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.72222222222 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251104973058 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0691818135364 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0677103807591 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125590282519 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.059708300924 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 13.0946893788 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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